Wednesday, July 13, 2011

Can a native speaker of English check structure and grammar of the sentences, thanks?

I met a Mexican boy on the Internet, he asked me have supper together and go to see a film. He can play football and does cook jolly well. He was coming China by his lonesome and setting up a company. He is my ideal boy, I wanna be a girl who worthy of him. I am willing to change myself to make me better starting today, My first act as memorize fifty new words on a daily basis in the next month.

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